Wednesday, August 16, 2017

I am learning to write a recount



The 100 Days of School Party

Room 7 had a 100 days of school party.
There were 3 things to do.
Step 1 Ice the 100 cupcakes.
Step 2 Do the 100 exercises.
Step 3 Eat the 100 cupcakes!
My favourite exercises were the hula hoop and jump running. The end of the best party ever!
(Written for Mrs Beach).

By Aaron







1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Well done Aaron. You are becoming more confident at writing your own ideas in writing and sounding out. You tried to use the structure of a recount. but need to remember to use sequence words 'First, Next and Finally' instead of Step 1, Step 2 and Step 3.